1.Some people believe that spending money on developing technology on space exploration is unjustifiable and there are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over how to allocate national coffers effectively.

While

some hold a statement that technological investment in exploring outer space should be made, the opposite claims that spending on other aspects can bring more tremendous benefits. The former is valid to some extent, meanwhile, I am an advocate of the latter. Without a shadow of a doubt, splurging the budget on

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exploration can be conducive to

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lives in

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distant future. In

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day and age, the natural surroundings have been alarmingly exacerbated by reckless actions and greedy needs of humans, which leads to the fact that it is possible for the Earth to become uninhabitable

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. By greatly developing cutting-edge pieces of equipment to dig deeper into the unknown universe, people can pave the way for finding other alternative livable planets which can potentially replace the Earth if extinct.

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, the Moon or Mars can be cited as a gateway for

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to understand the whole universe. If there is any source of water and oxygen in those places, they can be people’s future shelters.

Hence

, cashing in high-tech gizmos to have a firmer grasp of

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can be immensely advantageous for many years to come.

While

the merit of money well-spent on space-discovering technologies is widely acknowledged, other more essential aspects should be focused more, especially education and the healthcare system. Because some certain countries which are quite underdeveloped and impoverished are not suitable for squandering too much money on space exploration, which makes little difference to their current serious situation, those two backbone industries can bring more positive impacts on the productivity of the

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workforce.

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, by allocating the national budget to improve facilities in schools or hospitals and offering incentives to reduce

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burden for students and patients, the government can ensure a better-educated and healthier source of manpower devoting their lives to the nation, which directly boosts the country’s economic strength.

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, schooling and medicare care are two specific fields that a country should concentrate on investing in. In conclusion, it is undeniable that cashing in advanced technology to explore space is

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in the far future for human existence, for some countries, cashing in other essential facets like education and

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system can do wonders more.