The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012.
The line graph provides data about the changes in three areas of
crime in New Port city centre between 2003 to 2010.
Overall
, in all years
robbery
had the lowest number
of incidents
.
As can be seen, initially
robbery
had the lowest figure of incidents
with the
Correct article usage
a
rate
of roughly 600, whereas
, burglary
had the highest number
of incidents
at approximately 3400. From 2003 to 2004 the rate
of burglary
rose reaching at
its peak accounting for 3750. From 2004 to 2008 the Change preposition
apply
rate
of burglary
declined and in 2008 the rate
was 1250. Over the years
the rate
of burglary
increased and in 2012 the rate
was a little less than 1500. Originally the rate
of car
theft
was roughly 2750. From 2003 to 2006 the rate
of car
theft
dropped by approximately 750 from 2750 to 2000. Over the years
car
theft
had some minor changes and in 2012 the rate
of car
theft
was roughly 2750 which was in 2003. In 2003 the rate
of robbery
was roughly 600. In 2015 the rate
of robbery
reached at
its peak at 900. Over the Change preposition
apply
years
the rate
of robbery
saw some changes, however
in 2012 robbery
had the lowest number
of incidents
at 750. In 2012 robbery
had the lowest number
of incidents
at 750, meanwhile, car
theft
had the highest number
of incidents
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, robbery, number, incidents, rate, burglary, car, theft with synonyms.
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