ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
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Address the task more completely by covering all parts of the prompt. Discuss the justification for animal experimentation, consider the ethical implications, and explore possible alternatives to this practice.
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