The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
The table shows
about
indicators of social and economic sectors among four countries in 1994 Change preposition
apply
to
United Nations Statistics. Change preposition
according to
Overall
, it can be seen that four countries have variative Linking Words
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number
in the all of categories.
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numbers
To begin
, Linking Words
Japan
has Use synonyms
highest
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the highest
number
of annual income per person, namely 15760. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, Linking Words
Canada
has Use synonyms
similar
amount Correct article usage
a similar
income
yearly as Change preposition
of income
Japan
does. Use synonyms
Whereas
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Peru
and Use synonyms
Zaire
obtained 160 and 130 dollars. Use synonyms
Then
, Linking Words
Japan
becomes a Use synonyms
countey
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country
county
which
its citizen has Correct word choice
where
longest
expectancy. Change the article
the longest
Then
as earlier Linking Words
Canada
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also
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come
up with Wrong verb form
came
similar
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a similar
the similar
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number of
life expectancy at birth namely 76. People Correct quantifier usage
apply
that
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who
lived
in Wrong verb form
live
Peru
have less range of life expectancy compared with Use synonyms
Japan
and Use synonyms
Canada
. Use synonyms
However
, Individuals Linking Words
that
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who
lived
in Wrong verb form
live
Zaire
have Use synonyms
shortest
life among those countries.
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the shortest
Next,
in terms of Linking Words
day to day
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day-to-day
calorie
that Fix the agreement mistake
calories
accepted
per individual, the Add a missing verb
are accepted
number
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reaching
the thousands mark. In Wrong verb form
reaches
this
turn, Linking Words
Canada
and Use synonyms
Japan
become Use synonyms
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the leader
leader
which has Fix the agreement mistake
leaders
biggest
calorie supply at 3326 and 2846. Correct article usage
the biggest
While
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Peru
and Use synonyms
Zaire
achieved calorie supply with almost similar Use synonyms
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number
. Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
Last
, regarding to literacy rate of Linking Words
adult
, Fix the agreement mistake
adults
Canada
and Use synonyms
Japan
reached almost perfect Use synonyms
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number
namely 99%, Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
whereas
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Peru
and Change preposition
in Peru
Zaire
individuals on average have Use synonyms
percentage
of literacy ability in 68% and 34%Add an article
a percentage
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, japan, canada, peru, zaire with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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