The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar graph illustrates data on how average
families
in one particular country spent their weekly income
in 1968 and 2018 respectively.
Overall
, it is clear that
in 1968 families
spent more on food while
later the highest proportion of their earning
was spent on leisure activities. Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
In contrast
, fuel and power expenditure
were the lowest in both years.
In 1968, food was a popular option among Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
families
, constituting approximately 35% of their weekly income
. However
, 10% of their income
was spent on housing, clothing and footware
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footwear
while
household and personal goods accounted for about 8% of families
spending, and transportation received around 9% of weekly Change noun form
families'
family's
income
. Furthermore
, fuel and power received the lowest spending.
By 2018, leisure had become the top spending category, constituting approximately 23% of weekly income
while
housing received slightly less at about 19% of income
weekly. Furthermore
, food and transport received the lowest percentage of spending, at about 17% and 14% respectively. It was evident that spending on fuel and power was lower in both years.Submitted by sadiahussain028 on
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