The charts show information concerning speed-camera use, together with statistics on road accidents, for the city of Melbourne. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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The bar chart represents the data on the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
speed-cameras
in Melbourne between 2002 and 2005, Correct your spelling
speed cameras
whether
the line graph compares the statistics of deaths and Correct word choice
and
accidents
in the same period.
Overall
, most of the speed-cameras were edtablished
in 2005, Correct your spelling
established
while
the least number was in 2002. Additionally
, the peak of mortality rates occured
between 2004 and 2005, reaching the biggest proportion of Correct your spelling
occurred
accidents
in 2005.
To begin
, looking at the bar graph, 25 cameras were placed in the city in 2002, followed by around 35 in 2003. It becomes obvious that due to
many accidents
happened in 2004, more cameras were provided in that year, at approximately 60, achieving the greatest number of 150 in 2005.
According to
the line graph, slightly above 3% of accidents
were recorded at the start of the period, fluctuating to about 3,5% and back till 2004, gradually moving up to slightly under 4%. Even though mortality rates were considerably low from 2002(below 1%) to 2004, at 1%, the proportion of deaths had jumped to just under 2% after 2004 and then
went back to lightly above 1%.Submitted by innakireeva0101 on
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