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In some countries, secondary schools provide students with an opportunity to learn skills such as cooking, basic repairs, drawing and woodwork. What are the advantages and disadvantages of teaching such non-academic classes in school?

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 some non-academic
courses
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 few nations, secondary schools offer non-cognitive programs for students.
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This
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courses
 in secondary
school
. One of the prominent merits is that
this
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This
 means learners have a chance to obtain
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 in order to they will use
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For example
, if
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 learns
cooking
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 program in
school
, he will be independent and
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cooks
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 by himself without
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 of his parent. Another merit is that non-cognitive
courses
 have numerous job demands in the job market
along with
 higher
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 because plenty of skilled persons can
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such
 as chef. Despite these advantages, studying non-academical
courses
 in secondary
school
 has some drawbacks.
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 of the crucial disadvantages is that pupils waste their time and energy when they learn these
courses
instead
 of they have to focus on their main streams namely science and technology in order to they will get a good score. Another demerit is that
this
 course only has demand and employment opportunities in foreign lands rather than domestic countries, so pupils will suffer to get
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To conclude
, learning non-cognitive programs in secondary
school
 has advantages and disadvantages. It helps
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 jobs in
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corporate companies are the benefits. It wastes
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 time and energy and will suffer to find jobs in domestic nations
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 the
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 of
this
 phenomenon.
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