The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams indicate the
floor
map of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
Overall
, several changes have been made around each corner of the
floor
.
In addition
, some equipment has been either omitted or added. The Game club located in the northwest of the
floor
has been removed,
additionally
, there is no space for playing video games now.
Hence
, the
kid’s
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area, which contains Children’s fiction books and storytelling events, has been replaced with the game club. Tables and chairs have been removed in the centre of the
floor
. Self-service machines are now available in the east part of the
floor
. Considering the southern parts of the map, It can be vividly seen that Adult fiction books which once used to be in the western part of the
floor
, have been moved to the east side with a new Information desk just above the self-service machines. As mentioned, the kid’s area was moved to the northeast of the
floor
which has been altered with the lecture room. A café to the right of the entrance door can be observed which once used to be the Enquiry desk.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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