The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
number
of trips made by children
in one country from 1990 to 2010 and
using different types of transport. The figure gives Correct word choice
apply
a
total Correct article usage
the
number
of trips per years
unit by millions. Change the noun form
year
Overall
, it can be seen that in 1990 most of
Change preposition
apply
teenarger
preferred the journey to Correct your spelling
teenager
teenagers
school
by walking. In contrast
, in 2010 most children
trevel
to Correct your spelling
travelled
school
by car passenger.
Looking in
the Change preposition
at
1990
era, there were using car passengers around 4.5 Correct your spelling
1990s
million
per year. In addition
,some children's
preferred cycling and Change noun form
children
also
within teenager's
who Change noun form
teenagers
were
preferred walking and the bus has Unnecessary verb
apply
number
of travel to around 6.2 Change the article
a number
the number
million
and approximately 5.9 million
, respectively.
Turning in
the 2010 century, Change preposition
to
look at
the Verb problem
apply
number
lowest for preferred travel to school
is cycling has around 2 million
in this
era. On the other hand
, many children
also
preferred travel
to Fix the infinitive
to travel
school
which
walking Correct pronoun usage
apply
abour
6 Correct your spelling
about
million
per year.Submitted by suchanya3105 on
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