The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates how electric
power
is generated by geothermal power
plant
. Fix the agreement mistake
plants
Overall
, it is evident that water
is the main source of energy.
To begin
, we need to pump down cold water
deep down to 4.5 km beneath the earth. Through the injection well, the cold water
will reach the hot rocks, which is known as the geothermal zone, turning the cold water
into hot
one and Correct article usage
a hot
pump
it up from the production well underground back to the condenser on the land.
Wrong verb form
pumping
Next,
the condenser will convert the hot water
into hot steam, of
which the steam Change preposition
apply
power
transforms the energy to turn on the turbine. The fast-speed swirling of the turbine puts the generator in function and electricity is therefore
generated for our power
plant.Submitted by candylaw on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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