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The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London

The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London
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The chart illustrates the
number
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 of
passengers
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 in
London
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 underground stations around sixteen hours. It can be seen, the line chart experiences up and down. Looking more closely at the chart, most of the highest
number
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 of
passengers
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 in
London
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station
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 is the
time
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 when
people
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 are going home and the
time
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 when
people
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 go to work.
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, there is the peak
time
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 of the
London
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 Underground
station
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. It is noticeable that the peak
time
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 is divided into three sections.
whereas
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, the lowest percentage of
passengers
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 in
London
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station
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 is divided into
two
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 sections. The first peak
time
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 at
London
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station
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 is at 8.00 in the morning. At 6 am the average of one hundred
passengers
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 started but in
two
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 hours the
number
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 of
passengers
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 rose to four hundred
people
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.
Moreover
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, in the next
two
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 hours, the
number
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 of
passengers
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 fell,
less
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to less
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 than 200
people
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 at 10.00 am. About the
time
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 10.00-16.00, there is upward down steadily, from
two
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 hundred
people
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 and up to three hundred
people
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 and fallen until one hundred
passengers
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 at 16.00.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, london, station, time, people, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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