Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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country
. While
some people
tend towards the viewpoint that economic progress
ensures a high standard of living, I would have to support the idea that other people
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introduction
Start with a clear and concise introduction that explicitly states the main argument and how you will discuss both views. Avoid unclear statements and generalizations.
body paragraph
Develop well-structured paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point of view. Begin with a topic sentence, followed by explanations and examples that are clearly linked to the main argument.
coherence
Enhance the coherence of your essay by using a range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas within and between paragraphs. This will help your essay flow more logically.
examples
Provide specific, real-world examples to support each view discussed. This strengthens your argument and shows a deeper understanding of the topic.
conclusion
Conclude your essay by summarizing the main points discussed and clearly stating your own opinion. Ensure that the conclusion ties back to the introduction and provides a clear resolution to the debate.
grammar and style
Review grammar and punctuation to ensure clarity and professionalism in your writing. Avoid repetitive structures and strive for varied sentence constructions.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.