Write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at work. - apologise for missing the meeting; - explain what happened; - say what you will do to compensate.
Dear Mr Tom,
The reason why I am addressing you is that I am going to tell you. I meeting missed
last
week. I am sorry my boss.
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I am looking forward to your answer in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your letter has a clear logical structure. Begin with the purpose of the letter, follow with detailed explanations, and conclude with the actions you will take to rectify the situation.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use appropriate greeting and closing formats for formal letters. For example, start with 'Dear [Name],' and conclude with 'Yours faithfully,' or 'Yours sincerely,' followed by your full name.
Coherence and Cohesion
Devote each paragraph to a single idea or topic. This will aid in organizing your thoughts more clearly and make your letter easier to understand.
Task Achievement
Respond completely to all parts of the prompt. Make sure to apologize, explain what happened, and clearly state how you will compensate for missing the meeting.
Task Achievement
Maintain a suitable writing tone for formal or semi-formal letters. Avoid overly casual language and ensure professional communication.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite