Some people believe that the activities of large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
There is a growing belief that the
existance
of big multinational Correct your spelling
existence
companies
contribute
to the economic growth of developing Correct subject-verb agreement
contributes
coutries
. Correct your spelling
countries
However
, there are also
people who think that these companies
are only benefitting themselves and harm others. In my opinion, apart from the harm they may cause, these large multinationals also
provide some significant benefits for the locals.
Activities undertaken by industries in one country
will create more jobs and involve the local communites
on the field. As Correct your spelling
communities
community
Correct article usage
a consequences
consequences
, it leads to Fix the agreement mistake
consequence
a
better employment. Remove the article
apply
This
condition will result to
the reduction of poverty in the particular Change preposition
in
country
, as well as
promoting their economic growth. For example
, Tesla's battery factory in Indonesia helps to reduce unemployment in this
country
by 15% just after 2 years.
On the other hand
, it is commonly known that big companies
build their factory in developing countries
because it seems to be an easier option. First,
it allows them to reduce their operational cost by paying the local workers under the minimum wage they would paid in developed countries
. Second,
most developing countries
are known for lacking of
environmental regulations. Remove the preposition
apply
Therefore
, for companies
, it can help them to avoid to fulfil
their obligations relating to the environment. Change the verb form
fulfilling
As a result
, many developing countries
, such
as Indonesia and Vietnam, experience a
severe pollution and Remove the article
apply
general
decrease in environmental quality Correct article usage
a general
due to
the existance
of big Correct your spelling
existence
industries'
Change noun form
industries
factories
in their Correct word choice
and factories
country
.
To conclude
, activities
of big Correct article usage
the activities
companies
in developing countries
may contribute to the
Correct article usage
apply
economical
growth as well reducing poverty in the particular Replace the word
economic
country
. However
, government
should take part Correct article usage
the government
to reduce
Change preposition
in reducing
Correct article usage
the negative
negative
impact of these corporations' activities. Local Correct article usage
the negative
goverment
should help to regulate the minimum wage and the environmental obligations of the company.Correct your spelling
government
governments
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