The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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Remarkable information is provided regarding the three possible locations for a recreational

center

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by the given map. From an

overall

view, it can be seen that C is the best location for constructing a leisure

center

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since not only is it far from

hectic

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the hectic

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pace of life but

also

provide

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a fresh atmosphere for customers. By a closer examination, it is obvious that C is near greenery and intact nature,

also

visiters

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can do sightseeing and explore different species of flora and

funa

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fauna

however

, A is in

vicinity

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industrial

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the industrial

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zone which can result in air and noise pollution.

This

fact

make

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it a bad location to build be

intertainment

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entertainment

center. Turning to B which is near to residential area, it can be argued that it is a perfect location for

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suffers

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from

lack

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of time and

has

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a small window of time to commute.

Althought

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Although

, it is far from woods.

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4 paragraphs

153 words

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The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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