The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018

The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018
The bar chart demonstrates data about how each
household
's income was allocated in different categories between 1968 and 2018.
Overall
,
it is clear that
leisure activities had the highest share in average consumption costs of each
families
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,
while
that of food was the least. Average spending on leisure activities rose from approximately 8
percent
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to nearly 23 % between 1968 and 2018.
Moreover
, in these years, the average spending by families increased by 6
percent
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for transportation and 8
percent
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for
household
chores. In 1968 every
household
spent most on food,
according to
35% of their income per week
while
in 2018,
this
figure decreased by almost 17
percent
.
Also
,
expenditure
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expenditures
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on fuel and power, personal goods and clothing and footwear all had a depletion to no more than 5
percent
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of weekly income between 1968 and 2018.
While
money spent on
household
goods remained at roughly 7%.
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