The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
the line graph depicts
the
information about how much individuals were Correct article usage
apply
traveling
by three different vehicles over a six decades Change the spelling
travelling
periods
between 1970 and 2030
after the analysis, it is clearly stated that the number of Fix the agreement mistake
period
people
who used to travel by car were
about 5 Change the verb form
was
million
in 1970 after three years straight the pattern did not change and went on increasing then
in 2010 a small dip was seen and again it numbers sky rockted
and reaches its peak to 9 Correct your spelling
rocketed
rocked
million
moreover
, in 1970 few people
using train almost 2 million
then
the passengers start to rose for 4 decades
furthermore
, the same dip was seen surpassing the bus transport and the figure went up afterwards touching almost 6 million
, on the other hands
, the bus transport used by Fix the agreement mistake
hand
people
in
the Change preposition
at
Correct your spelling
beginning
begaining
of the year Correct your spelling
beginning
were
considered the second option Change the verb form
was
then
the number start
to decreased in 1980 but the pattern did not change its direction and start to fell down for 5 decades Wrong verb form
started
staright
Correct your spelling
straight
overall
, it is vividly manifested that all three transport used by people
showed fluctuation in each periods
of time but the car was mostly used and Change to a singular noun
period
Correct your spelling
convenient
covenient
transportation and the interest Correct your spelling
convenient
of
using Change preposition
in
bus
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the bus
start
to Wrong verb form
started
decreased
Wrong verb form
decrease
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