The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the
number
of
crimes
that occur in England and Wales in the period
during
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from
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1970 until 2005. As we can see, in general
the
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car
theft is the highest
number
of
crimes
that
occurs
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occur
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over
the
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apply
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time.
According to
the data, at the beginning of 1970, the
number
of criminal cases are very low. There was
not
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no
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street
robbery
at all,
while
the house burgling was about 0,20 million
casess
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cases
.
In addition
, the
number
of
car
theft
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thefts
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was about twice
than
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that
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the
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of the
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house
burgling
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burglar
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.
Furthermore
, each
types
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type
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of
the
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apply
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crimes
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crime
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were
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is
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growth
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growing
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. If we look at the data,
it is clear that
the
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apply
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street
robbery
is the
less
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least
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occuring
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common
criminal. In the year 2005, the reported cases
is
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are
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just 0,20 million.
Whereas
, the crime of house burgling
was fluctuated
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fluctuated
has fluctuated
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but it still increased by around 0,30 million in 2005.
On the other hand
, it
interesting
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is interesting
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to see that the
number
of
car
robbery
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robberies
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reached a peak in 1995. All in all, the
number
of
crimes
that occur in England and Wales increased. Especially for the
car
robbery
, the cases
still
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are still
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the highest than others.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, crimes, car, robbery with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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