For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter ● state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this ● give details of how you have benefited from the club ● explain why you want to leave

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Dear Sir or Madam, I've been a member since

last

2017 with the VIP membership with a

full year

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bill of $134. I am glad and enjoyed those years being a member of the club. All staff and crew are polite and I

was not even face

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did not even face

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any issues during those years of my tenure. I've

also

found new friends and family in the club that help

for

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any

aspects

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of life. My family

are

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has

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deciding

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to migrate to

Austalia

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Australia

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for

the

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apply

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better opportunities so, I will request

for

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apply

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the cancellation of my membership starting on the first week of March 2024 as I can no longer use it here. I am hoping for the success of the club.

Sincerly

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Sincerely

yours, Analyn

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coherence cohesion

Ensure the letter is structured with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Each paragraph should deal with a separate aspect of the request.

greeting and closing

Begin your letter with a more personalized greeting if possible, or maintain the formal tone consistently throughout.

single idea per paragraph

Try to dedicate one paragraph to each point requested by the task. For example, describe your membership and payment details in one paragraph, how you benefited in another, and your reasons for leaving in a third.

complete response

Provide more detailed information about your membership type and how you've paid for it. This will help fulfill the task requirements more completely.

suitable writing tone

Use a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter. The tone currently shifts between formal and informal. Choose one based on the context and stick with it.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

122 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

polite greeting
membership cancellation
benefited
annual/monthly/family/individual membership
credit card/direct debit/cash payment
positive experiences
social interactions
fitness improvements
personal reasons
financial constraints
relocation
change in interests
gratitude
procedure
notice period
courteous explanation
future rejoining
sign-off

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