The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres.
The chart illustrates how patients score different services at three medical
facility
.
In the First medical facility, Longston Change to a plural noun
facilities
centre
, these aspects are scored in Capitalize word
Centre
this
way: Booking appointments is 5.2, meaning that it is mid-range. The next aspect is doctor's service, with 8.0, which is very good. After that goes care of children with rating
Correct article usage
a rating
6.3
. What is more, pharmacy and responding to concerns are rated at 5.1 and 4.3, meaning that there should be work done in order to improve. After that comes Perevil Change preposition
of 6.3
centre
, with scores of 9.1 for appointment opportunities, 8.7 for doctor's service, 7.5 for care of children, and 9.6 for responding to concerns. Capitalize word
Centre
Nevertheless
, the pharmacy's rating is lower than others, 6.3. In contrast
with the second clinic, the last
, Marchbank, has been given a slightly lower rating, such
as 7.8, 8.4, 7.3, 5.8, and 6.5, respectively.
Overall
, after counting all of the points from these 3 clinics, it is needles
to say that these points highlight the crucial issues in each aspect of those 3 participants. Correct your spelling
needless
While
Perevil Centre has the highest point, 8.3 and has the minimum amount of work to do, other clinics have the opposite situation. For instance
, Longston
or Marchbank healthcare facility, Correct your spelling
Langston
which
has 5.3 and 7.2.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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