The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres.

The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at

three health centres.
The data indicates significant disparities in patients' perceptions of the quality of services provided at the three health
centers
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. The
Peveril
Centre stands out as the highest-rated, with an
overall
mean score of 8.3 and the highest
ratings
across all service areas.
In contrast
, the
Longston
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Langston
Center performed the weakest
overall
, receiving just a 5.8 rating,
while
Marchbank
falls in between with a score of 7.2. Notably, the aspect of Doctors' service received relatively positive evaluations across all three
centers
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, with scores ranging from 8 to 8.7.
However
, Pharmacy services received the lowest
ratings
across all
centers
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, with scores of 5.1, 6.3, and 5.8 for
Longston
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Langston
,
Peveril
, and
Marchbank
respectively. There is significant variation observed in
ratings
for other aspects of provision. One particularly noteworthy discrepancy in
ratings
is in the area of Response to concerns, where
Peveril
received the highest score of 9.6, compared to 6.5 at
Marchbank
and just 4.3 at
Longston
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Langston
Longton
.
Ratings
for
Care
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of children are moderate across all three
centers
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,
although
they are notably lower at
Longston
(6.3) compared to
Peveril
(7.5) and
Marchbank
(7.3).
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