An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?
Nowadays, doctors and teachers play a vital role in daily life.
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countries
,professional doctors and teachers prefer to go abroad Use synonyms
instead
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countries
. I believe that Use synonyms
this
situation is the biggest problem for poorer Linking Words
countries
and it must be solved.
In today's world, most of the people are very concerned about their future. Use synonyms
For
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this
reason, in poor Linking Words
countries
, people prefer to go Use synonyms
foreign
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to foreign
countries
for their future plans and careers. Use synonyms
This
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circumtance
can be caused by many problems and Correct your spelling
circumstance
lack
of many sources. First of all, poverty is the biggest cause because Correct article usage
a lack
professionals
want to live Use synonyms
inhigh
quality life Correct your spelling
in high
standarts
. Correct your spelling
standards
In addition
, they want to provide better opportunities for their families and children. Linking Words
Therefore
, they go to different Linking Words
countries
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for working
if they might earn Change preposition
to work
more
salary. Fix the agreement mistake
a higher
For example
, my aunt is working at Linking Words
hospital
and she puts a lot of effort into her job. Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
However
, her salary is approximately equal Linking Words
with
ordinary workers. Change preposition
to
For
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this
reason, she Linking Words
want
to work in different continents.
There are too many solutions in order to solve Change the verb form
wants
this
problem. Some precautions should be taken by governments. Linking Words
For instance
, more schools ought to be built and education systems must be reorganized. These developments could give hope to Linking Words
professionals
and citizens because Use synonyms
good
future can be created with only excellent education. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, citizens can be more polite toward Linking Words
to
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apply
professionals
. They can provide a better working environment. Use synonyms
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Countries-which
are Correct your spelling
Countries
suffered
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suffer
poverty-have
a lot of economic and financial issues. If Correct your spelling
poverty have
goverments
can achieve to make successful investments, they can prevent Correct your spelling
governments
government
to
brain immigration.
In conclusion, doctors and teachers are special Change preposition
apply
professionals
for their Use synonyms
countries
. In poorer Use synonyms
countries
, Use synonyms
professionals
abandon their Use synonyms
countries
rapidly. Citizens and governments should Use synonyms
aware
of Add a missing verb
be aware
this
important topic. They should start to find some solutions and attempts in order to solve brain immigration problems.Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
Clearly organize your essay into clear paragraphs, each with a single main idea, supported by specific examples or reasons. This will help improve the logical structure of your essay.
coherence cohesion
Include an introduction and conclusion that clearly outline the problem and the proposed solutions. Your introduction should present the topic clearly, and your conclusion should summarize your main points and restate your position.
task achievement
To fully address the task, ensure you equally discuss both the problems caused by the migration of professionals from poorer to developed countries and the potential solutions to these problems. Both aspects should be explored in detail.
task achievement
Use specific examples to support your main points wherever possible. This helps to make your ideas clear and comprehensive. While you gave an example involving your aunt, try to include broader examples or statistics that strengthen your arguments.
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