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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph
provide
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 information about the
amont
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amount
 of coffee exported from Brazil, Colombia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. In general, the export of coffee from all three countries increased over the period of ten years Looking in more detail, the line illustrates
the
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that
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 coffee exports from Brazil increased from around 12
millions
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million
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kiligrams
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kilograms
 in 2002 to 20
millions
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million
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kiligrams
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kilograms
 in 2008,
then
 showed
little
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a little
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 bit
deaceased
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decreased
deceased
 between 2008 and 2010 before
agine
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again
 rose significantly to
rach
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reach
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 25
millions
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million
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kiligrams
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kilograms
 in the final year, which was the highest of all the period. Colombia showed
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a simliar
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simliar
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similar
 trend, there was
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an increased
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increased
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increase
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of
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in
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coffe
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coffee
 export in the
frist
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first
 three years to reach more
then
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than
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 10
millions
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million
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kiligrams
 in 2006,
after
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and after
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then
 fell
dramaticaly
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dramatically
 to less
then
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than
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 5
millions
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million
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kiligrams
 in 2008.
However
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However,
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this
 figure rose to 15
millions
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million
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kiligrams
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kilograms
 in 2012.
In contrast
, between 2002 and 2006 the amount of
coffe
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coffee
 exported from Costa Rica fell significantly from 15 to less
then
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than
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 10 in 2006, before increased to reach 20
millions
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million
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kiligrams
 in 2012, which was the
secand
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second
 highest over the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, kiligrams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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