The bar chart illustrates the amount of hours that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists used per day to do 3 activities
The bar graph shows the quantity of
time
that four ethnic group
of Fix the agreement mistake
groups
tourists
spent per day to do
three leisure activities.
Change the verb form
doing
Overall
, the amount of hours
that Chinese
tourists
spent on
reading books was significantly higher than other groups, and they less frequently used their Change preposition
apply
time
to visit places. While
American and Turkish Correct word choice
apply
tourists
allocate their leisure time
more balanced than Brazilian tourists
that
Correct pronoun usage
who
used
their spare Wrong verb form
use
time
mostly at the beach.
In terms of reading books, the volume of hours
that Chinese
tourists
spent
per day on Wrong verb form
spend
this
particular occation is 8 hours
which is dominantly higher than other groups. The remaining groups used four to five hours
of their spare time
on this
activity. The quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
hours
that Chinese
visitors spent on
visiting places was the lowest with one hour per day compared to their counterparts.
The amount of Change preposition
apply
hours
that Brazilian tourists
spent
at the beach during their leisure Wrong verb form
spend
time
is 6 hours
and this
amounts are 5, 4, and 3 Change the determiner
these
hours
for Turkish, American, and Chinese
tourists
respectively.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, tourists, hours, chinese with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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