The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented graph indicates some information about the average monthly alters in the value of three metals in 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen that the Nickel
had the highest and lowest rate compared to other materials of this
line graph. Whereas
, Copper has stayed steady at approximately 2% after some slight fluctuation.
In the first 3 months
, Copper and Zinc have experienced the least fluctuation. While
the proportion for Nickel
has dramatically decreased to 1%. In the next 3 months
, trends in all line graphs have been slightly decreased. From the 5th until the 7th month of 2014, Nickel
experienced its considerably lowest trend to -3% in the middle of the year. 3 months
later, the Average alter between Copper, Nickel
and Zinc has stabilised respectively at 1%, -0.5% and -1%. Finally
, for the rest 4 months
of this
year, all of these substances have experienced a low increase in their trend.Submitted by bardiasoheilinezhad71 on
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