The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented graph indicates some information about the average monthly alters in the value of three metals in 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen that the Linking Words
Nickel
had the highest and lowest rate compared to other materials of Use synonyms
this
line graph. Linking Words
Whereas
, Copper has stayed steady at approximately 2% after some slight fluctuation.
In the first 3 Linking Words
months
, Copper and Zinc have experienced the least fluctuation. Use synonyms
While
the proportion for Linking Words
Nickel
has dramatically decreased to 1%. In the next 3 Use synonyms
months
, trends in all line graphs have been slightly decreased. From the 5th until the 7th month of 2014, Use synonyms
Nickel
experienced its considerably lowest trend to -3% in the middle of the year. 3 Use synonyms
months
later, the Average alter between Copper, Use synonyms
Nickel
and Zinc has stabilised respectively at 1%, -0.5% and -1%. Use synonyms
Finally
, for the rest 4 Linking Words
months
of Use synonyms
this
year, all of these substances have experienced a low increase in their trend.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, months with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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