Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.
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Many
students
have become fond of migrating to English
-speaking countries
to pursue higher education
, especially those originating from a developing country
. Two reasons might explain this
phenomenon, namely that English
-speaking countries
provide better education
system
compared to other Fix the agreement mistake
systems
countries
and the role of English
as a language
has facilitated people
from around the world to speak to one another.
First and foremost, it is important to note that education
qualities differ in every country
. Taking this
fact, it is logical for students
that
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come
country
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countries
of
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apply
education
in other countries
in the hope of pursuing better education
which translates to better opportunities. For instance
, student
from Indonesia that Add an article
a student
receive
an undergraduate degree from a US campus makes 5 times more than those receiving a degree from Indonesia. The disparity in Correct subject-verb agreement
receives
education
quality makes it very lucrative for students
to migrate to an
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countries
.
The second reason being
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of English
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The English
language
has opened various opportunities for students
across the world. As a language
spoken by most people
, it allows people
to understand one another, and therefor
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therefore
allowing
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allows
people
to pursue education
in countries
with better education
institution
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institutions
For example
, there are many international students
in the Netherlands mainly due to
the country
's proficiency in speaking English
compared to France due to
its limited knowledge of the language
. In addition
, without such
international
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an international
language
, exchanging informations
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information
pieces of information
to
citizens of other Change preposition
with
countries
would be nearly impossible.
To conclude
, English
-speaking countries
have become a pristine destination to pursue higher education
due to
the inequality in education
equality. Moreover
, the rise of English
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the English
language
has allowed students
to understand study materials written outside of their mother tounge
, opening opportunities.Correct your spelling
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Task Achievement
Focus on providing a clear and concise introduction and conclusion for your essay. The introduction should clearly state the reasons why people want to study in English and its importance internationally. The conclusion should summarize the key points made throughout the essay without introducing new information.
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