The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.

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These maps highlight the plan for future upgradation of Islip town

centre

Firstly

it is planned to encircle the town

centre

with a dual carriageway

road

connected to the existing

road

on the western and eastern sides. The school will remain in the existing location, south of the carriageway

along with

the old housing complex. The existing main

road

will be closed to traffic and converted to pedestrian only. The shops north of

this

will be transformed and incorporated into a new shopping

centre

Additionally

, a bus station and car park will be made adjoining

this

to facilitate increased footfall. At present, Islip town

centre

has two housing areas, adjacent to each other in the south. It is planned to increase housing quarters to four, with the additional housing located within the dual carriageway

road

south of the main lane and east of the car park.

This

housing will

also

be connected to the dual

carriage way

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carriageway

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road

. The park is planned to be downsized to make way for new developments, the shops south of the main

road

will

however

remain in their current location, with no planned changes.

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The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in.

The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.