The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.

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These maps highlight the plan for future upgradation of Islip town

centre

Firstly

it is planned to encircle the town

centre

with a dual carriageway

road

connected to the existing

road

on the western and eastern sides. The school will remain in the existing location, south of the carriageway

along with

the old housing complex. The existing main

road

will be closed to traffic and converted to pedestrian only. The shops north of

this

will be transformed and incorporated into a new shopping

centre

Additionally

, a bus station and car park will be made adjoining

this

to facilitate increased footfall. At present, Islip town

centre

has two housing areas, adjacent to each other in the south. It is planned to increase housing quarters to four, with the additional housing located within the dual carriageway

road

south of the main lane and east of the car park.

This

housing will

also

be connected to the dual

carriage way

Correct your spelling

carriageway

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road

. The park is planned to be downsized to make way for new developments, the shops south of the main

road

will

however

remain in their current location, with no planned changes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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5 paragraphs

189 words

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The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.

Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money that they make because of their positive effects on society. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Students from poor background such as rural areas often find it difficult to access to university education, so people think universities should make it especially easy for them to study at. To what extent do you agree or disagree?