You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.
The following line graph illustrates changes in the proportion of
coffee
exported in various countries, Brazil, Colombia
and Costa Rica, between 2002 and 2012.
In 2002, Colombia
exported 5 million
kilograms
and we had a steady growth until 2006 but this
land declined dramatically. However
, Colombia
had a significant development from 2008 to 2012. Moreover
, in 2012, this
country sold 15 million
kilograms
of coffee
approximately. Furthermore
, Brazil sold around 12 million
kilograms
of coffee
in 2002, about 20 million
kilograms
in 2008 and slightly less than 25 million
kilograms
in 2012. In addition
, Costa Rica had a considerable increase in 2006 and it had
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this
growth until 2012, about 20 million
kilograms
.
Overall
, this
chart demonstrates the number of coffee
exported from three countries, Colombia
, Costa Rica and Brazil. Plus, all of these lands had increased in their sales.Submitted by bazarjanimohammadreza83 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, colombia, million, kilograms with synonyms.
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