The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps depict a range of expected developments going made in the
centre
of a small town namely Islip.
Overall
, this
location is going to undergo remarkable changes. New roads and several facilities will be established.
On the commercial side, there will be an enormous transformation. A shopping centre
is going to open in the place of some shops that are situated in the north of this
centre
. The site of other shops will not change. The main road will be destroyed to make way for a dual carriageway. The park which stands in the southeast of the centre
will be rebuilt to reduce its size. Considering the residential area, new housing will be developed in the northeast and next to the park. The location of the school which is located to the southwest of Islip will remain unchanged. With regard to amenities, a car park and a bus station will be constructed on the right side and left side of the shopping centre
, respectively. Finally
, a pedestrian path is going to extend in the middle of Islip town centre
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