the diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electric. summmaries the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
the given drawing provides an idea of how electrical capability is generated with the help of
rain
flow.
looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, the entire method of generating capacity supplies contains seven steps.
the given drawing provides an idea of how electrical capability is generated with the help of Linking Words
rain
flow.
looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, the entire method of generating capacity supplies contains seven steps.
beginning with the rays of the sun and ending with the generation of electrical function supplies for hospitals and schools. in the first step, seawater absorbs hot sun rays,Linking Words
then
the Linking Words
rain
vapour converts into clouds, and they downpour as Use synonyms
rain
into the dam. afterwards, the valve Use synonyms
that is
located at the bottom of the dam is open, which results in a saliva flow pressure causing the turbine to immediately start to rotate producing high voltage electricity potential, and at the same time the residual rainwater returns back to the reservoir through a tube by the force pumped in order to recycle the aqua and Linking Words
further
use. the final step, underground cables distribute Linking Words
this
energy to different areas, Linking Words
such
as hospitals,schools,houses and factories.
in short, it is a long and expensive process because lots of resources are required.Linking Words
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