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The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs provided depict data on
crime
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 rates in the UK over the past year. The first graph is a line graph that showcases the
crime
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 rate per age group,
while
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 the second one illustrates the frequency of different types of
crime
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.
Overall
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, the data suggests that young people are more likely to commit
crimes
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. Specifically, the age range between 12 and 28 years old accounts for a higher number of
crimes
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, with the peak being reached at 20 years old. After that, the
crime
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 rates consistently decrease to below 10%. The most common type of
crime
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 in the UK
last
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 year was violent
crime
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, which accounted for approximately half of all
crimes
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. The second most frequent types of
crime
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 were property and drug-related
crimes
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, which were almost equally prevalent, at 23% and 22%, respectively.
Conversely
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, public order
crimes
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 were less frequent, accounting for less than 10% of all
crimes
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 committed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, crimes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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