The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.
The graph shows
the
information about the number of exported Correct article usage
apply
coffee
from three countries (Brazil
, Columbia, and Costa
Rica
) from 2002 to 2012, using kilograms (millions
) as a unit measurement.
Overall
, the amount of coffee
sent abroad in three different countries increased over a decade. While
Brazil
was the country which consistently rose, two other country
showed fluctuation on their graph.
In 2002, Change to a plural noun
countries
Brazil
started to export under 15 kilograms (millions
) coffee
which was lower than Change preposition
of coffee
Costa
Rica
(15 millions
Change to singular
million
killograms
). Correct your spelling
kilograms
While
the number of exported coffee
product
in Fix the agreement mistake
products
Brazil
slighly
rose in 2006, it reached 15 Correct your spelling
slightly
killograms
(million), there was Correct your spelling
kilograms
Correct article usage
a noticable
noticable
Correct your spelling
noticeable
decreased
in Replace the word
decrease
Costa
Rica
(under 10 millions
Change to singular
million
killograms
). Even though, following years show constantly increased for both Correct your spelling
kilograms
country
. in 2012 the total Change to a plural noun
countries
amont
of Correct your spelling
amount
Brazil
(25 millions
Change to singular
million
killograms
) was higher than Correct your spelling
kilograms
Costa
Rica
(20 millions
Change to singular
million
killograms
).
Columbia started in the lowest Correct your spelling
kilograms
positions
Fix the agreement mistake
position
which
only 5 Correct pronoun usage
apply
millions
kilograms in 2002. There was a Change to singular
million
flutuation
from 2002 to 2012. Correct your spelling
fluctuation
Moreover
, there was Correct article usage
an extremely
extremely increased
in 2006 and Replace the word
extreme increase
Correct article usage
a decreased
decreased
in 2008. in 2012, after Replace the word
decrease
showed
Wrong verb form
showing
increase
in 2012, Columbia became the least.Add an article
an increase
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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