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The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.

The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.
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The graph shows
the
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information about the number of exported
coffee
 from three countries (
Brazil
, Columbia, and
Costa
Rica
) from 2002 to 2012, using kilograms (
millions
) as a unit measurement.
Overall
, the amount of
coffee
 sent abroad in three different countries increased over a decade.
While
Brazil
 was the country which consistently rose, two other
country
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countries
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 showed fluctuation on their graph. In 2002,
Brazil
 started to export under 15 kilograms (
millions
)
coffee
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of coffee
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 which was lower than
Costa
Rica
 (15
millions
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million
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killograms
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kilograms
).
While
 the number of exported
coffee
product
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products
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 in
Brazil
slighly
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slightly
 rose in 2006, it reached 15
killograms
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kilograms
 (million), there was
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a noticable
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noticable
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noticeable
decreased
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 in
Costa
Rica
 (under 10
millions
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million
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killograms
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kilograms
). Even though, following years show constantly increased for both
country
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countries
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. in 2012 the total
amont
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amount
 of
Brazil
 (25
millions
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million
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killograms
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kilograms
) was higher than
Costa
Rica
 (20
millions
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million
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killograms
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kilograms
). Columbia started in the lowest
positions
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position
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which
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only 5
millions
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million
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 kilograms in 2002. There was a
flutuation
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fluctuation
 from 2002 to 2012.
Moreover
, there was
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an extremely
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extremely increased
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extreme increase
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 in 2006 and
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a decreased
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decreased
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decrease
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 in 2008. in 2012, after
showed
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showing
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increase
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an increase
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 in 2012, Columbia became the least.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, costa, rica, millions, killograms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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