Some people think that consumerism can boost the economy and create business and jobs. Others consider that society becomes a ‘ throw-away society’ producing unnecessary waste. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some

people

argue that the majority of consumption can contribute to

an

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economic growth and create more employment opportunities,

while

the opponents of

this

concept take the view that producing unnecessary waste can result in a throw-away society.

Although

consumerism can help the growth of

economy

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and

creating

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more job places, I believe that

overconsumption

has detrimental effects on

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society and the environment.  On the

one

hand, most

people

consider that the economy can be enhanced on a significant scale by consuming more products. If

people

purchase more items and things from any

markets

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, it can result in more revenue. In

this

way, businesses can widen their chains to the whole area, maybe to the all country.

For instance

, in my city,

one

shop, "Al

market

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", has drawn

the

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significant number of consumers.

Hence

, after gaining

the

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significant amount of money, the boss of

this

shop has decided to create chains, and in

this

way, they offered more employment opportunities for

people

.

On the other hand

, some consider that

overconsumption

is indeed more harmful

for

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both the community and the nature. If

overconsumption

is observed in

one

certain area, it means that a glut of products will be thrown to

streets

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because not all of them might be necessary items for

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use.

Moreover

, it can lead to a reduction in natural demands. Take Madrid as an example. In

one

year, the consumption of some products has increased on a considerable scale, and it has ended with a dearth of main sources, including food, water, and other things. In conclusion,

while

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production growth can be beneficial for businesses in terms of boosting the economy and generating more employment places, I consider that the potential drawbacks of

overconsumption

such

as a reduction in the number of essential living demands cannot be ignored.