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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.
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The bar chart above gives information about
oil
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 production capacity for 6 countries from 1990 to 2010. Units are measured in
millions
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 of VBarells.
Overall
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, at first
glance
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 it is evident that Saudia Arabia produced more
oil
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 than other countries over a 20-year timeframe,
while
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 Qatar ranked
last
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 throughout the
years
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.
To begin
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 with, estimated
oil
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 consumption capacity in Iran, Iraq, Kuwait and UAE followed relatively similar patterns
during
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over
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 20
years
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. In 1990, the rates stood at less than 5
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millions
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million
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of
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VBarrels, after which all of those increased slightly in the following year, despite UAE,
it
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levelled
of
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 at 2.6
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millions
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million
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of
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VBarells.
Subsequently
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, the rest of the period until 2010 experienced the same upward trend reaching 4.8, 2.4, 2 and 2.5
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millions
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of
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VBarells respectively.
In contrast
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, the energy usage of Qatar stood at 1
million
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 in 1990, after 10
years
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 there was a gradual increase in the rates approximately doubling its initial level.
However
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, the rates fell to 1
million
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 again and till 2010 the production of
oil
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 in Qatar evened out at
this
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 point. Looking at Saudi Arabia, the country witnessed an upward trend over the 20
years
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, starting at 7
million
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 and finishing the period at nearly 14
million
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 which was the highest indicator of all countries in
Gulf
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the Gulf
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, millions, years, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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