The bar chart below shows the expenditure of two countries in consumer goods in 2010. (pounds sterling)
The bar chart highlights data about
money
which was spent on several consumer goods in the UK
and France
in 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling.
Looking from an overall
perspective, what stands out from the bar chart is that the British
spent more money
on consumer goods than France
in the period given. Both the British
and the French spent most of their money
on cars ,whereas
money
which was spent on perfume is
the least in the Wrong verb form
was
UK
compared to cameras in France
.
In terms of cars, people in the UK
spent just about £450,000 on this
as opposed to the French who spent £400,000. The British
spent more money
on books than the French around £400,000 and £300,000 respectively. In the UK
, pay for cameras which was just over £350,000 was double that of France
, which accounted for only £150,000.
In contrast
, money
spent on the other goods was higher in France
. Above £350,000 was spent by the French on computers which was steadily more than the British
who spent exactly £350,000. Neither of the countries spent much on perfume which accounted for £200,000 of expenditure in France
but above £150,000 in the UK
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