Studying the English language in an English speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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in an
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country
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is the most effective way to
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the
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it is not the only
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completely agree
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thesis and I will elaborate
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perspective in
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essay. Being in an
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environment is the fastest and best
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to get used to the
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. Several studies show that
people
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who spent two to three years in an
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country
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able
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to
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their
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skills significantly compared to those who spent the same amount of time in a
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speaking
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. The supportive
enviroment
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environment
allows
people
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to absorb the
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completely and
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them to practice more on
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basis,
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as in
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, bus stations, public
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, and so on.
People
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learn by doing,
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, they will get the hang of the
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faster. Unfortunately, being in an
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country
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is a
previledge
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privilege
for only a small group of
people
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. In terms of studying the
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, there are many other ways that are more accessible and affordable for anyone,
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these
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method
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might take more time. Some of the most
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methods are by listening
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to music
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, watching movies, or even playing games in
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. These methods allow someone to learn in a fun way. By increasing someone's exposure
of
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, they are
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increasing their chance
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improving their
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. In conclusion, I completely agree that being in an
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country
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is the most effective
method
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to study
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.
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, not everyone can afford
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opportunity.
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, there are many other ways that someone could do to improve their
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,
such
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as watching movies or listening to
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music and podcasts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
  • motivated
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