Some people feel that music should be taught in school while others believe it is better to focus on the sciences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no different type of objective fact that

this

statement

about some

people

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that music should be taught in school is prevalent in our reality because of its importance. Most

people

agree with

this

statement

because of its many benefits. Some of the

people

highlight its

disadvantages

. I would like to discuss the

advantages

and the

disadvantages

in my next paragraphs the same. Describe different types of

advantages

I would like to mention the first and foremost advantage which is the chance for children to study music. Another advantage that might come to mind

people

might be chance that children can become

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good

musician

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. So, there are many different types of

advantages

that we can describe now but I would like to discuss my next paragraph. On its darker side, there are some

disadvantages

that make it problematic and worrying, I would like to highlight two

disadvantages

. First is that it might be

educational

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problem for the sciences.

Second,

there are causes of different types of other problems for many economics. I think there are many shortcomings of

this

kind and we can talk about

this

statement

all the time. Now I want to speak about my conclusion. Concluding the above

statement

, neither its negative nor the positive sides can be ignored. In my opinion, the positive and the negative sides are mixed processes in our life that follow each other and they should be considered more generalized.

Therefore

, I remain of the opinion that it is not necessary to ignore the

advantages

and

disadvantages

and to outline their impact in reality