The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
The provided table depicts the number of male and female workers and workplaces in England and Wales. The data is provided from
Change the article
the year
year
1851 to 1901.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, it is clearly seen that,
significant growth is seen in the number of Remove the comma
apply
factories
from year
1861. Change the article
the year
However
, constant
Correct article usage
a constant
declined
in Wrong verb form
decline
Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
employees
is seen from
the table.
looking at the table in detail, Change preposition
in
therewere
about 477,100 total Correct your spelling
there were
employees
working in 225 different factories
in year
1851. In the Change the article
the year
year
1861, 131,780 male employees
were performing their work in 227 companies compared to 160,000 females. However
, 80,123 and 76,132 male employees
used to work in Change the article
the year
year
1871 and 1881 respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
years
While
,
60,000 and 50,000 females were working in 622 and 721 companies according in the Same Remove the comma
apply
years
.
Fix the agreement mistake
year
Analyzingthe
chart Correct your spelling
Analyzing
further
, 65,000 males and 40,000 females completing
their Wrong verb form
completed
in
tasks in 625 different Change preposition
apply
factories
in year
ge factories
in year
1891. It is apparent that 61,000 total employee
were used to work in various 600 firms. Out of Change to a plural noun
employees
them
31,000 were males.Add a comma
them,
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, factories, employees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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