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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
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The provided table depicts the number of male and female workers and workplaces in England and Wales. The data is provided from
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year
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years
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 1851 to 1901.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that
,
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 significant growth is seen in the number of
factories
 from
year
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 1861.
However
,
constant
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declined
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 in
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the numbers
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numbers
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number
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 of
employees
 is seen
from
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 the table. looking at the table in detail,
therewere
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there were
 about 477,100 total
employees
 working in 225 different
factories
 in
year
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 1851. In the
year
 1861, 131,780 male
employees
 were performing their work in 227 companies compared to 160,000 females.
However
, 80,123 and 76,132 male
employees
 used to work in
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year
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years
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 1871 and 1881 respectively.
While
,
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 60,000 and 50,000 females were working in 622 and 721 companies according in the Same
years
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year
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.
Analyzingthe
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Analyzing
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further
, 65,000 males and 40,000 females
completing
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completed
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 their
in
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tasks in 625 different
factories
 in
year
 ge
factories
 in
year
 1891. It is apparent that 61,000 total
employee
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employees
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 were used to work in various 600 firms. Out of
them
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them,
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 31,000 were males.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, factories, employees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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