The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.

The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.
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The pie graphs illustrate the
sources
of the
UK
tax
income
for
last
year
and the total state spending for
last
year
in the
UK
.
Overall
, the three main
sources
of the
UK
tax
revenue were
income
tax
, national insurance and
value added
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tax
,
however
, the most significant outcomes of the
UK
government were pensions, health care, and welfare expenses for the
last
year
.
Income
tax
accounted for almost 30% of the total
UK
tax
gain for
last
year
, representing the highest
tax
income
for the
UK
. National insurance and
value added
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tax
were the remaining major
sources
of
UK
tax
revenue with just over a fifth and 17%. The
tax
income
from other
sources
, corporation
tax
, council
tax
, business rates and fuel duty varied between 5% and 11%. The government spent a fifth of the budget on pensions, becoming the biggest expense compared to the other areas. Health care and welfare expenditures accounted
for18
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for 18
% and 17% respectively,
while
the state spent 14% of the budget on education for the
last
year
. The remaining areas
such
as defence, protection, general government, other
spendings
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, and interest payments on debt recorded between 7% and 3% of the total expenses.
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