The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The diagram depicts the procedure in which
electricity
is produced via geothermal energy. A geothermal power plant has several parts including a cold water
resource, a condenser, a turbine and a generator, working together to generate electricity
.
Overall
, the process consists of five stages, beginning with entering cold water
into the geothermal zone and ending with producing electricity
through a generator.
Initially
, cold water
is pumped down underground through a 4.5-km pipe. Next,
in the injection well stage
, cold water
is injected into hot rocks (geothermal zone). This
process namely the production well stage
turns cold water
into hot water
. Then
, hot water
is passed through a pipe to the condenser. In this
stage
, hot water
is condensed and converted into steam. In the subsequent stage
, produced steam rotates a turbine and produces movement force. This
force is able to power the generator, producing electricity
. Finally
, generated electricity
is distributed to consumers.Submitted by maryam.nutrition1988 on
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