You bought a computer, and it is not connecting the Internet. Write a letter to an IT specialist to ask for help. - explain the details of the computer - tell the problem - ask for help
Dear Sir ,
I am writing to ask for information about how to connect
computer
to Add an article
the computer
a computer
Add an article
the internet
internet
. I have just bought Capitalize word
Internet
new
Correct article usage
a new
computer
5 days ago . The computer
suggested
by Add a missing verb
is suggested
professional
manager who is working in the central shopping mall.
Actually, I Add an article
a professional
knew
more things about some technologies. Because I easily understood how to use them. Verb problem
learned
However
, I was shocked when I couldn't understand Correct article usage
the softwares
softwares
of that Correct your spelling
software
last
fashion computer
. The most
Correct article usage
Most
programmes
Correct your spelling
programs
are look
like same Change the verb form
look
with
other types of Change preposition
as
computer
, but Fix the agreement mistake
computers
this
one is different.
Firstly
, I would like to know more about difference
between computers, because I wonder if I bought Add an article
the difference
wrong
one. Correct article usage
the wrong
Furthermore
, I heard that new brand
products are usually unreliable . What do you think about Add a hyphen
new-brand
this
advertise
Replace the word
advertisement
.
The manager told me that Change the punctuation
?
computer
has a Correct article usage
the computer
many
facilities than others and it's suitable for every age of people. So, I asked some questions from him , but he couldn't reply clearly. I would be grateful if you give me some useful information about these opinions.
You could send the Correct word choice
lot more
Correct your spelling
above-mentioned
above- mentioned
Correct your spelling
above-mentioned
Correct your spelling
information
informations
to my email. I look forward to receiving Correct your spelling
information
prompt
reply !
Yours sincerely,
NozigulAdd an article
a prompt
Submitted by omondavlat91 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Achievement
Ensure your letter directly addresses the specific concerns outlined in the task. Although you mention having difficulty with the computer's software, further specifics on the internet connection issue would strengthen your task response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Begin with a clear introduction that directly addresses the recipient and outlines the purpose of your letter. For clarity, divide your letter into paragraphs each focusing on a specific aspect: describe the computer, clearly state the problem, and then directly ask for help.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use suitable greetings and closures for formal letters. In your letter, the greeting 'Dear Sir,' is appropriate, but ensuring you close with a more formal sign-off, such as 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your name, would align better with formal letter-writing conventions.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.