The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates future changes in the design of the office building.
Overall
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, there are several major differences between the present and future layouts, relocating the entrance, getting rid of the grass zones, and changing the structure of smaller rooms.
Initially
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, both the kitchen and canteen will be converted into office rooms,
while
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the storeroom remains the same.
Furthermore
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, the grass zone on the left will be transformed into a gigantic outdoor seating area with three rows of chairs available on the left of the entrance to it,
while
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its analogue on the right is going to be reconstructed into a more spacious hall. Particularly, WCs will take place in the top-right corner of the office,
also
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meeting a new coffee machine for the workers next to them.
Moreover
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, the space around the bottom-right corner of the illustration is planned to be used as a meeting area with two rows of seats.
In addition
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, around the main entrance, four separate small offices are going to be combined into two larger rooms.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • current layout
  • future development
  • architectural style
  • structural enhancements
  • functional improvements
  • modernization
  • space requirements
  • safety regulations
  • redevelopment
  • capacity
  • aesthetic appeal
  • facilities
  • office space
  • infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • eco-friendly
  • accessibility
  • renovation
  • expansion
  • upgrade
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