some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution , others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In
the
modern life, international car-free Correct article usage
apply
days
role a vital play . It is Use synonyms
a
best choice to reduce pollution Change the article
the
as well as
reduce accidents. Linking Words
However
, some people suggest some other ways. I would argue that it is better Linking Words
if
Change preposition
to
having
suitable international Wrong verb form
have
days
which Use synonyms
banning
cars
The option to have international car-free Wrong verb form
ban
days
is attractive for several reasons. Use synonyms
Instead
of having to see many vehicles moving on the road, we can have some Linking Words
days
to Use synonyms
enioy
fresh air around and the air will become airy. Everyone can walk on the street or Correct your spelling
enjoy
hike
a bicycle for a holiday. Verb problem
ride
This
will help their Linking Words
heath
very much.
Correct your spelling
health
On the other hand
, some people think there are some better ways to dealing Linking Words
this
problem. Perhaps you think if the Linking Words
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
ban
Correct subject-verb agreement
bans
car
moving on the day, it will Fix the agreement mistake
cars
be disrupt
the work order of many people. Change the verb form
disrupt
For example
, if somebody Linking Words
have
an urgent matter and they have to move a long distance so they don't have Change the verb form
has
car
or fast vehicles like Add an article
a car
this
, Linking Words
this
will Linking Words
be
Verb problem
have
negative
impact on personal work. So we should Add an article
a negative
deployment
suitable car-free Replace the word
deploy
days
. Use synonyms
For instance
, on holidays or festivals because these Linking Words
days
are a duration when everyone Use synonyms
are
Change the verb form
is
relax
after a busy year. Wrong verb form
relaxed
This
not only reduces air pollution but Linking Words
also
limits unfortunate accidents.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seemed to me that if we have free-car Linking Words
days
which is suitable, we can create a better society.Use synonyms
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