Some people say it is acceptable to use animals for our benefit, others say it is wrong to exploit them. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Some people have an opinion that

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explotation

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exploitation

of

animal

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animals

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is bad,

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others, don’t agree with

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. The first group of people, who don’t support

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the exploitation

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on

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animal

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animals

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think that

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all

animals

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should have the same rights as humans. I think, their arguments are to stop

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because

animals

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are living things and they haven’t

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killed by other living things.

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, folk from

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group can be

vegetarian

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.

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, they think that

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killing

animals

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have

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to disappear. So vegetarians refuse

meat

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, eggs and other food that contain

animals

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. As for

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group. They

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argue with them, so it means, that they agree that killing and exploiting

animals

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is normal and even can be good. Maybe, they have an opinion, that life is much better and easier with it and

animals

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so useful in our nowadays life. What about

meat

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, all types of

meat

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have a lot of helpful vitamins, protein and

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amount of different nutrients.

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two opinions are so different and have their advantages and disadvantages. I like the idea that

exploitation

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the exploitation

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at

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animals

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is terrible, but I cannot live without

meat

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and other things

which

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apply

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made of

animals

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