The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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of male and female university

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in Canada for the period of 1992 to 2007.

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, it is obvious that the

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of

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increased over the

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and there were always more women students than men. In 1992, there were almost 100

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female

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in Canada, significantly higher than the

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of male

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. Over the next 5 years, until 1995, female

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slightly rose

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before experiencing a decrease until the year 1998.

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, the

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rebounded and experienced a drastic rise from 1998 to 2007. By the end of the period, 150

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female students graduated. The

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of male

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saw a similar trend to that of women.

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1995, reaching almost 80

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graduates

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before declining back to 70

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in 1998. Soon after, the

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of

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steadily climbed up until 2007, reaching more than 90

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. Despite the positive

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trend, the amount of men graduating is 60

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less than the

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of women.