The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

The line chart illustrates the comparison between the

number

of male and female university

graduates

in Canada for the period of 1992 to 2007.

Overall

, it is obvious that the

number

of

graduates

increased over the

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and there were always more women students than men. In 1992, there were almost 100

thousand

female

graduates

in Canada, significantly higher than the

number

of male

graduates

. Over the next 5 years, until 1995, female

graduates

slightly rose

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before experiencing a decrease until the year 1998.

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Straight after

, the

number

rebounded and experienced a drastic rise from 1998 to 2007. By the end of the period, 150

thousand

female students graduated. The

number

of male

graduates

saw a similar trend to that of women.

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the

number

peaked

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1995, reaching almost 80

thousand

graduates

before declining back to 70

thousand

in 1998. Soon after, the

number

of

graduates

steadily climbed up until 2007, reaching more than 90

thousand

graduates

. Despite the positive

overall

trend, the amount of men graduating is 60

thousand

less than the

number

of women.