The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of three types of spreads (margarine, low fat, reduced spreads, and
butter
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) that were consumed over a period of 26 years between 1981 and 2007.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that
butter
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was the most popular at the start,
however
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, it ended up being the least consumed of the three spreads. Oppositely, the figure of low fat and reduced spread appeared at the top of the list, despite starting at the lowest. Looking at the details, the figures for
butter
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and margarine faced a significant decline throughout the period. As regards
butter
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, it started at just above 140
grams
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.
Next,
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the number went up by nearly 20
grams
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in 1986.
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, in the same year,
grams
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rapidly fell, ending up at approximately 50
grams
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. As opposed to
butter
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, the figure for margarine started at around 90
grams
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,
then
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, it slightly fluctuated after which the number declined in 2007, finishing at 40
grams
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.
In contrast
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, the consumption of low fats and reduced spreads had an upward trend. The amount of low fats and reduced spreads use started only in 1996 at 10
grams
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which
further
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soared to around 85
grams
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in 2001. After a slight decrease, the figure finished at 70
grams
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words butter, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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