The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. USA,France, malaysia, Brazil and Egypt
The given line graph compares the figures for international visitors in 5 different regions, over a timeframe of 15 years, from 1995 to 2010.
Generally speaking, the
USA
had the highest figure of international visitors among these lands, and the statistics of travellers who visited Use synonyms
France
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duration increased rapidly. So, Linking Words
France
as a tourist destination become more popular over time.
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Initially
, in 1995, more than 70 tons of international caravansaries travelled to the Linking Words
USA
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just above 30 total cruisers travelled to Linking Words
France
. Brazil and Egypt had less than 10 thousand travellers Use synonyms
this
year compared to just above 20 lot outings in Malaysia. Over the period, the total number of tourists who visited these 5 states increased with some slight fluctuations.
In 2005, crews to the Linking Words
USA
reached 90 sum which was the highest among these countries. In Use synonyms
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year, international visitors' number in Linking Words
France
was about 65 tons which was a sharp increase compared to its previous international sightseers’ total. In Malaysia, Brazil and Egypt, traveller's sums increased but did not exceed 40 banks. Use synonyms
Finally
, in 2010, international traveller numbers in the Linking Words
USA
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France
intersected at about 90 thousand. Compared to the previous years, Use synonyms
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gained the highest ratio of international travellers. Use synonyms
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also
increased in Malaysia and reached over 45 trillion which is almost double compared to the data in 1995. Brazil and Egypt had the lowest statistic of international guests among the given five countries, and in 2010, they both had around 25 international patrols.Linking Words
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