The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares how families in one country spent their
money
in two years
1968 and 2018 which are fifty
years
apart.
Overall
, the most money
had been spent on Food back to 1968. Weekly income which was spent on Household goods remained the same amount during these 50 years
.
As mentioned, the most weekly income which was 35 percent
, was Change the spelling
per cent
being
spent on Food back Unnecessary verb
apply
to
1968, Change preposition
in
while
, fifty
years
later, this
amount halved in 2018. Income which was being spent on Housing was 10 percent
in 1968 Change the spelling
per cent
while
it doubled 50 years
later. Fuel and power was the lowest proportion in both 1968 and 2018.
According to
the bar chart, the money
which was being spent on Clothing and footware
Correct your spelling
footwear
,
was Remove the comma
apply
one tenth
of the total in 1968 and it halved to 5 Add a hyphen
one-tenth
percent
in 2018. Household goods remained the same proportion in these Change the spelling
per cent
fifty
years
. The most money
in 2018 was spent on Leisure. Transport was
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
rose after fifty
years
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