The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2000 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2000 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provided data on the total proportion of movies produced compared to the proportion of cinema ticket revenue in a country between 1996 and 2000.
Overall
, It can be seen that the number of movies launched in 1996 was much lower than that in 2000 and Ticket sales of films in the drama and comedy genres make up more percentage compared to those in fantasy and
romance
ones. The proportion of film dramas produced the most with 27%, followed by 20% comedy, 16% fantasy, and
finally
romance
is the lowest with 5%. In 2000, It can be seen that the outstanding development compared to 1996 for premiered films of 4 film genres except
Romance
remained stable. In 1996 Comedy was the most popular genre, accounting for the highest percentage of sales at 20%
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1996,
while
fantasy was the least chosen by viewers, earning a modest figure of 3%. The growth in % of tickets sold was seen in 2000,
however
, only the
romance
genre suffered the most decline in sales, down 3% compared to 1996.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words romance with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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