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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates how many magazine was sold per person in five
countries
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 which are A, B, C, D and E from 2003 to 2005, and projected
sales
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 for 2007. Units are measured in
number
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 per person.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that the
number
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 of people buying
magazines
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 decreased in all
countries
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 throughout the given years, with the exception of
countries
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 D and E. The sold
magazines
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 in
country
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 D grew within 2 years and projected will increase too in 2007. In terms of the
country
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 selling the
magazines
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 the most, the
number
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 of
magazines
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 sold in
country
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 D started at just below 20.
Thereafter
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, the
sales
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 experienced a slight rise to precisely 20.
Moreover
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, the magazine
sales
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 calculated will climb by nearly 5 in 2007. Regarding the other
countries
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 who face a drop in
sales
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,
countries
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 A, B and C demonstrated a similar pattern. The
sales
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 in
country
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 A stood at just under 50 in 2003,
then
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 had a moderate fall to around 42 in 2005.
In addition
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, the
sales
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 projected will fall too in 2007 by 5.
In contrast
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,
country
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 E started the
sales
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 at below 5 before rising to approximately 5. In the following years, the
sales
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 projected will back to the
number
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 at the beginning.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, sales, number, magazines, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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