You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear John,
I want to cordially invite you to the birthday party of my brother.
As you know my brother has been living in Australia for the
last
5 years due to
his higher studies. He has come to live with us for a few months and his birthday falls on March, 20. I have decided to have a commemoration and make his day memorable forever.
Actually, rather than arranging a party at the house, the party is going to be held in Maharaja Resort, Brampton. I know you are coming from a far location and it'll be hard to find the place. You should put the correct address on Google Maps like Maharaja Resort, Brampton, A1B2C3. I think this
would help to reach safely.
I want you to stay with us that night because as soon as the guests leave, we have another plan of having a movie night surprise at my house for everyone. If you will
stay, I will be relentlessly glad and we will enjoy ourselves Verb problem
apply
alot
more.
I hopeCorrect your spelling
a lot
,
we’ll meet soon.
Navneet.Remove the comma
apply
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task achievement
Expand the details about why you are having the party, providing more personal or unique reasons to make the invitation more engaging and heartfelt.
task achievement
Consider including a brief plan or itinerary for the party to enhance the reader's understanding and anticipation of the event.
coherence cohesion
Enhance the letter's coherence by using a wider range of linking devices or transition phrases to connect ideas more smoothly between sentences and paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Introduce variety in sentence structure and vocabulary to make the letter more interesting and demonstrate a higher level of language proficiency.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,